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A.L : Was your audience and tone of voice in your essay the same in your model essay? How did your audience impact the way you wrote your paper, your tone and language.
You forgot to address some of the other aspects of writing we practiced and your experience with them(Brainstorming, Peer review, research and draft process). Mention what did you do during your drafting process and research process, how was it to get an interview? Easy? Difficult? How did you eventually find a way to synthesize your work even though it was hard? Lastly, did you learn anything new from august?
forget what I said about the audience and your model essay. Your audience is fine but explain how it impacts the way your essay is written
This is a great start. Content is strong. What this reflection could use are some examples from your won writing. For example, you say that you initially didn’t mimic the style of the model essay. Could you say something–give an example–of text you changed from first to final draft that shows how you moved closer to the style of the model? First I did this…then changed it to this. You could do that in a number of places. It’s your choice what you choose to expand, but the reflection should definitely include examples from your own essay.
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