This is a good draft, Annie. Remember that it asks you to identify an audience (as opposed to describing the audience you identified and addressed in the essay itself). Develop your examples as much as you can–what else did you discover in peer review? How did you go about findings articles that supported your point? I apply this kind of expansive thinking to the other subjects in your essay.
Rhetoric and Social Justice
The City College of New York / Spring 2019 / Freshman Inquiry Writing Seminar Section HA2 / Instructors Caitlin Geoghan and Tom Peele
